Still Yourself
Try tongue hold
slow swallow
a longer pull of air
Let sky be below
your eyes
Don’t end at your finger tips
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Try tongue hold
slow swallow
a longer pull of air
Let sky be below
your eyes
Don’t end at your finger tips
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I really enjoyed this, instructions for living.
The use of the verb at the start really gives these lines momentum
Kevin
“Let sky be below/your eyes”! Wow! This poem powers and keeps going of its own energy. Interesting that the title wants stillness, but the poem is anything but still.
Same line sung to me!
Seems “still” to me. “Try, slow, let, don’t” are softly powered words. Followed your instructions and beyond fingertips – all of it – sky, air, earth… Great poem.
Love the soft nudge of this poem, especially the second stanza!