Strawberry Super Moon Pantoum
Navigated by lightning bugs last night. Cardinals, crows, and clouds today.
Paying a small crumb of my dues to the Universe,
I leave you a small bag full of tart apples and an unopened box of
Cold and Flu gel caps purchased last spring: that distant moon.
Paying a small crumb of my dues to the Universe,
I’ve learned to find balance before I drop my breath:
Cold and Flu gel caps purchased last spring: that distant moon
doesn’t know what it’s gotten us all into, does it?
I’ve learned to find balance before I drop my breath:
stopped counting puddles and precipitation rates. A statistic
doesn’t know what it’s gotten us all into, does it?
It doesn’t matter how many feet designate a hill from a mountain.
Stopped counting puddles and precipitation rates. A statistic
true for a home state isn’t the same for a present or future state.
It doesn’t matter how many feet designate a hill from a mountain.
It matters how you make friends, when you lead, and when you follow.
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These pantoums are such fun!
I agree…they take me to unexpected places. Well done!
Turned out great! I gotta try this now.
Please do! 🌞
Thanks for the poem and the tart apples.
Thanks for the endless reminders that the Universe loves me, is me, and loves us and is all of us.
I really enjoyed how you used this form!
It’s been such a good one for me! Admittedly I had about 8 lines I liked from a piece at least twice that big last night.
When revising, I said: Eh, I don’t know, there’s these chunks I’ll use, but even then…
And then I replied: Honey, start a Pantoum.
“Paying a small crumb of my dues to the Universe” I love this way of thinking — the spiritual nature as well as our personal obligation. Enjoyed this and will have to try one myself!
YAY!!! Thank you and enjoy your Pantoum endeavor.
Love this the repeated line is like finding a lost friend.
agree with Sylvia, lovely
Love this line: I’ve learned to find balance before I drop my breath: