String Around Your Finger
“got a thought for those who start to think of love
as the pursuit of a fool: It’s a palace from ruin.”
“Gather courage, if you’re doing something
do it, cause she’s got to go soon.”
— Dermot Kennedy, “A Closeness”
Consider the coastline—
how it waxes & swoons
on the whims of the moon—
our light
within
our darkness…
how it turns itself over in the night—
how the waves like watery sheets slide away
from sands wet with once,
leaving them
cold—naked—but how
they are reunited,
tucked in, ever righted,
at dawn…
how spectral ships like listing slips
of something that were tangible
yet carry memory like bless’ed baggage,
no less real for their passage
from sight…
how an island can lay hidden
over distant horizons,
no less present, no less sealed
while shore & glassy shore
though whole, yet feel
the ache–
the loss–
of Pangaea…
Yes, consider the coastline,
when you doubt
what you’ve seen,
when you forget
what you’ve felt…
when the fall comes & passes,
when temperatures drop
in the hollow spaces of your stomach
& winter’s teeth gnaw at your bones…
through the rebirth of Spring,
when all things are searching
for a mate, & flowers burst
from hiding places
to remind you
beauty
never
left…
& most of all, should the coming year bring you
back to this time—or the next one—or the one
after that…
…
should clocks slow to crawl—
should storms stop or stall—
should the dreams, again,
cause you to
fall…
remember this.
Remember me.
Remember the You
& babe,
please…
remember
you flew.
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This is gorgeous, Joseph! Every image rests perfectly in the poem’s rhythm.
“how the waves like watery sheets slide away
from sands wet with once,”
Powerful. Now that is a hell of a line. How you harness such might in so few words is incredible.
Thank you for reminding me of the power of companionship in writing, flight that this fledgling “poet” never thought possible.
This PoMo is will shine brighter than the rest for years to come. Thank you for a brilliant month.
See you next June. ☺️
I woke from a dream wherein an unknown number was texting me. It was something abiut ships in the night.
I turned in my darkness and fumbled my phone, knocking it off the nightstand. When I finally got it up to my eyes, it was 4:02–and you’d replied here one minute before.
I read yours too.
And I will respond, there, in kind.
When I feel the words will come.
For now—they will not.
I cannot.
After a breath under my Moon.
After a little more sleep.
After I’ve found some shade of peace in a not now and have been able to remind myself that then is still and always
Now.
But now. 😔
but *not* now, I mean.
the ebb and flow of this one carried a hope of return – but a hard bite that nothing remains exactly the same
lovely work Joseph
send me something
Thank you, Manny.
I will.
I think there is much (re-reading this, and the mirroring one today) that does remain the same. And perhaps much that change doesn’t necessarily mean less the better.
But a caesura, yes. For now.
One that sticks in the throat
and is hard to swallow. 🖤
*swoon trigger* indeed 🙂
🫂 thank you for following along this month, Dustin. You made me feel like we had a cheering section in a stadium full of intangibles like time and fate, etc, set against us.
Exquisite rhythmic movement.
Love:
waxes & swoons
on the whims of the moon—
waves like watery sheets slide away
from sands wet with once,
Thank you, Pam 🖤
I’ve really enjoyed reading
your poems this year.
Their emotional sweep
have carried me along
to where I couldn’t wait
for the next one.
🫂 Was just talking with Jay McCoy about how awesome you are, man. And how much your responses always mean. Thank you, Jim.
Nice. Love the controlled emotion in this build with so many good images.
Pshew. If ever a moment felt like it fought to resist control, it was this one. Thank you for saying this, Victoria. I think—testament to the space I’m able to go (recently) while writing.
This is a beautiful rhythmic piece with splashes of love and longing, remembrance and reminders. Your imagery has a power of its own, much like the ocean.
☺️ thank you, Virginia.
Glad to take you on this journey.
The lyricism and tone of your poems is so spon-on and I’ve enjoyed reading them this month and when I get the chance!
Thank you, dude.
One of my top five peeps here. Always try to find yours. You killed it this year.
This is the perfect poem to end the month with. Exquisite rhythm and a steady build of emotion. I’m looking forward to reading you again next June, new friend! 💜
Likewise, Morgan.
If I don’t run into you guys at some point in the year, may it be a beautiful one.
And thank you.
Needed to somehow be summative, and hopeful, and heavy with longing without falling into the negative it could have been.
Wonderful- love the Ann and flow of this work.
Ebb not ann
Thank you, Alissa 🙏