Suburbia
An old trope taking out
the hackneyed trash
on Sunday morning,
trips over a comma,
crashes, cusses,
spills clichés
about the cul de sac,
shifts to his knees,
scans to see
who might have seen,
clutches wads of crumpled
stanzas as if they had
again betrayed him.
He hunches all his
disposable words
back into the plastic bag,
dumps them resolutely
into the plastic bin,
then stomps back to
the plastic house,
he lives in.
8 thoughts on "Suburbia"
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a landfill full of literary revisions… what a thought!
I love the creativity you stitched into the mundane routine of taking out the trash. The repetition of “plastic” really emphasizes the feeling of suburbia. Great job!
I like the alliteration in the poem and it’s overall cleverness
Well, this is no piece of garbage! It’s fun, and well done! Thanks for sharing.
Trips over a comma!! I love it.
I loved this!
Love how the title gives context
Clever!
Love:
trips over a comma,
crashes, cusses,
spills clichés