Succession
Most of my childhood was spent
right here on these creek banks
gathering rocks and sifting sand.
Thirty years ago, the trees didn’t loom
overhead casting shadows across deep
still water like they do now.
They were seedlings,
the water shallow, moving fast,
a sandbar curved in just the right place
to pass hours with my neighbors in
make believe worlds we built together
working hard in our play.
I listen to the mocking bird try out
different songs as fish dart across
spots of shade in and out of sun,
my kids observing turtle eggs and
crawdads and dragonflies
each of us quiet in our awe.
I soak in this stillness,
let the slow current carry me
back in time
back to those days
neither of us were so grownup.
6 thoughts on "Succession"
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I love the life and motion in this poem. I’ve been thinking lately how far removed I am from “carefree” these days. You’ve captured that so well in this poem Thanks!
I love the way the last stanza isn’t a triplet, breaking the pattern, and almost feeling unnatural against the nature woven throughout the poem.
Quiet in our awe………. Wonderful poem.
I love how you showed the passage of time for the speaker–the seedlings to mature trees casting shadows, etc…
I really enjoyed this
working hard in our play
Nice poem.