Summer Laze
I brought home from the market
a half-dozen peaches
which I kept in a sack
on the counter until soft
beneath the thumb,
put them in the fridge
and on a hot afternoon
sat on the back stoop
and broke the furred skin,
yellow strings wedged in the gaps
between my lower front teeth,
a rivulet of cold juice down my chin.
I ate around the pointed pit,
slowly eating three of six,
the red-veined meat
giving way with a pleasing slurping sound.
The sweetness was complete:
a hint of tart that made me smile.
All the while the sun beat down,
drops of sweat rose on my arms,
ants staggered across bare ground.
Brown earth absorbed every drop of juice.
8 thoughts on "Summer Laze"
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
I can taste those peaches! Perfect.
Rich sensuous (even sensual) details here, Bill. Whew Lawd, I do love me some peaches, and your poem has set my taste buds tingling.
Yes! You totally capture the lush experience of eating a peach – the juices running down chin to earth.
I detect a little bit of William Carlos Williams here. (Remember his poem “This is Just to Say”? How he ate the plums in the icebox his wife was saving for breakfast?) I don’t know if WCW influences you, but this is a very good poem, Bill.
Thanks, Lee. This is somewhat of an exercise in trying to make the poetic from the mundane. But yes I did think of WCW while writing this, his plums, how he could probably say what I’m trying to say in two thirds as fewer words!
I am on the back stoop eating a peach with you, which rather than being mundane is absolutely sublime.
Excellent images, captures the experience and the context
I like that you changed the POV to looking down at the end of the poem, perfect ending to a nice poem