Summer of oh hell yes
when leaves fell around
the corner of last year you
shouldered exaggerated burdens
wore exorbitant layers
lived excessive nos
now the sun is ablaze
befriending happenstance
begging nakedness
beckoning oh hell
yes
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The way you break individual connected phrases/sentences into lines read really rhythmically and adds and extra strength to this.
I really love it.
when leaves fell around
the corner of last year
Sublime lines. Love it when a poem goes right to the way I feel too.
Bruce Florence