Swimming in the Creek
Our little arm of the Rockcastle River was small
and just the right shallowness to drive through.
The locals did it for years–yeehaw across the creekbed
right next to the small gully where we’d swim
and wave at those who passed in their familiar cars.
Sometimes a water snake and mosquito bugs.
Once, the torso of a young buck bobbed downstream.
Both playground and portal to Jackson County,
this water baptized my grandfolk’s church–
but now it’s the site of a low-height bridge.
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Interesting how things change
Before you turn around, it seems like there’s a new difference
“Yeehaw across the creakbed” is priceless. Nice one, Shaun.
Or “creekbed”.
Thanks, Bill!
Enjoyed this memory. Loved the “yeehaw across the creekbed.” There’s something so satisfying, but a little scary (at least to me) about driving over a creekbed, no matter how shallow the water is.
It’s the Russian roulette of it–it could easily have led to a flooded engine if things weren’t just so. Once we went through and I swear the water was almost at the Corolla’s window
Amazingly fleshed out painting. Yet the second stanza shows me to discard unnecessary words and choose just the right words.
I appreciate your kind words. To be honest, I wasn’t sure if it concluded in a meaningful way at all, but it’s growing on me a little
Brilliant:
yeehaw across the creekbed
So much memory here. Love it. 😁
Love the whole poem, but especially that twist at the end–nice!