Tennessee Drive
Near Rocky Top, the highway falls
down the mountain through the wedge
the US Army Corps of Engineers drove into
the granite with blasting caps
and coal mines.
I met a man when I stopped there
walking by the river.
Said he made fruit wine.
Said he worked in the mines
for a year, then vowed no more.
His wife died two years past.
and now his daughters looked in on him.
He told me she had cancer
and how the doctors wouldn’t listen
when she was sick,
how she wanted to go home,
and not die in that place
where men in white coats
looked right through her.
He showed me her picture
and paused.
I said she was beautiful.
We walked along the path below Norris Dam,
where the hummingbirds flew back and forth
from flower to flower on the river shore.
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Truly beautiful.
Wow!
I met a man when I stopped there
walking by the river.
Said he made fruit wine.
Said he worked in the mines
for a year, then vowed no more.
His wife died two years past.
and now his daughters looked in on him.
He told me she had cancer
and how the doctors wouldn’t listen
when she was sick,
how she wanted to go home,
and not die in that place
where men in white coats
looked right through her.
Pam, thank you. I tried to make it very plain spoken.
Amazing how you told us his story and made it so relatable. The ending really highlights how ethereal and fleeting and beautiful is life!
hummingbirds flew back and forth
from flower to flower on the river shore.
Perfect ending – I like how you’re still walking..story’s not over