Thank You Stranger
For stopping her
at the Kroger
to tell her that her
hair is beautiful.
Now that we are engaged
I feel, I fear, that my own
compliments are more or less
like this row of unwashed cars,
the silty puddle, the marooneed
shopping carts that is, they are
predictable, unimaginative
routine, compact, for lack
of a better word befitting
the occasion of her. The jubilee
of herin a rainsoaked
grocery store parking lot.
For her hair is like unto
rays of sunshine streaming
through the muck clustered
clouds, which someone
once said, and I believed, is
indeed the voice of god.
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Such a beautiful love poem! Love it!
indeed
through the eyes of a stranger
we see the beauty
of our own
life
This is magnificent! I love how you twist this simple moment into a sweet “jubilee.”
Love this!
routine, compact, for lack
of a better word befitting
the occasion of her. The jubilee
of herin a rainsoaked
grocery store parking lot.
This poem is so moving! Congrats on finding love!