That Humid Post-storm Need
It stopped raining
right before dark.
When the skies
cleared and the sun
sank behind the hills,
frogs started hollering
all around the house
and lightning bugs lit
up, painting patterns
across the night.
I stood on my porch
breathing in the soaked
air, bathing in countless
echoes casting out calls
of love or woe and
drinking in the sight
of dazzling small beacons
longing for the thing
we all want.
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I love this, especially the way the poem turned into its ending
This pastoral scene conveys the subject matter so well.
The poem itself breathes: The pacing and ending do excellent work.
Weighty with desire, love the flow and rhythm of this.
So much working here but the title into the final, twist enjambment is great!