That’s a poem
In the time it took to explain
to the Alabama-plated Uber driver
the location of my neighbor’s door
and to confirm the direction
allowed by the street signs
The June sun had burned his white van
so deep into my retinas
that roughly two minutes later
I could still see it, in perfect detail
first in white, then in carmine
Complete with tire and
bumper cut-outs
three distinct windows, side mirrors
and a racing stripe.
On the sidewalk it appeared the same size
it’s original had been from the street,
but somehow it shrank down
into my coffee when I went to drink.
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You render the scene well!
It’s almost like you’re burning it into my own eyes, also. I really like the way the last verse finds the image diminishing, almost as though you’re digesting it, groping for maybe the reason why it stuck—
Wow!!
I love this journey, and the laid-back language you use, though we also feel the strain you were under as a guidance system.
Marvelous.
Wowsers!
The June sun had burned his white van
so deep into my retinas
that roughly two minutes later
I could still see it, in perfect detail
first in white, then in carmine