The Bad Year
Death has risen in the sky
like a moon, cold & sharp,
slicing my sleep, daring me
to close my eyes, lest visions
of those I’ve lost burn my
brain to nothingness.
So I think I’ll fly—no, swim,
since that night orb has its own
gravity—swim with mermaid
tail through passionflower
with its wavy filament & spoke-
centered pansy & poppy cauldron,
where all manner of stem & leaf
tickle my skin.
And when I break surface & lean
on lily tongues & catch my breath
between hibiscus sails & tickseed
pinwheels, I may consider seeking
shade under coneflower parasols,
but my scales will flash, sun
bearers, nimbly-spangling green
ground where blade-
waves swell, crest, ebb,
rhythmic cradles for a woman
who has given up her legs
& only wishes to be
reef-rocked, where anemone
curls & unfurls & blanket
octopi cover her with their
maroon streamers.
11 thoughts on "The Bad Year"
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From the first image “like a moon,” this poem unfolds with gorgeous sounds and senses. The last stanza has a lot of weight to it: love “rhythmic cradles for a woman/who has given up her legs…”
Thank you!
I love that final image so much!
Thanks!
You use images of which I am familiar, but I am no merman.
I felt the waves rocking me, calming me – and the final stanza is a stunner, Taunja!
Thank you, Nancy!
This poem pulls me in and carries me along with each gorgeous image. So much lush sensory detail, and that breathtaking final stanza!
Thanks, Karen!
Taunja, it has been a lot to keep up with all the reading and somehow I didn’t see your poems earlier in the month.
You are an incredible poet.
Your imagery and pacing and detail. This poem gets better as it goes and it starts out awesome.
Incredible last stanza lands it. Thanks for writing and I hope to read more.
Oh, wow–thank you so much!