The Bottle
The Bottle
After Father’s Day,
as I always do,
I take a bottle
of Maker’s Mark
Whiskey
Handmade,
its trademark signature
red wax flowing down the neck
of that bottle,
every bottle distilled
at Loretta, Ky. USA,
its fully matured contents,
light amber, carmel
from charred oak barrel,
my father’s medicine for PTSD
contracted in WWII,
machine gunner
for Patton’s Headquarter Company
in the Battle of the Belgium Bulge,
when he was blown out of his foxhole
by an exploding tank.
I place the bottle on his tombstone.
I have no way of knowing
who will drink it this year.
21 thoughts on "The Bottle"
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Well-grounded in your description and image. I really enjoy this poem.
Thanks, Maggie, for liking this poem enough to make that wonderful reply.
you’re Making your Mark
on some late night
graveyard visitor
You raise an aspect about the poem that I had not considered, Jim.
Really fine writing, Rudy! The ending is wonderful.
Sylvia, your praise touched my heart, and could have not better ending.
Sentiment with a tail-end twist…. enjoyed this poem
Thanks, Amy, for liking the tail-end twist and telling me that you did.
Very touching
Thanks, Mike, I’m happy it is touching…
What a beautiful tradition. I love the details and the ending.
Since 2004, my son, is the only one to tell me he drank it when he asked me who put it there. He smiled. He lives in Texas and seldom gets back to Kentucky.
wow.
A toast to you, Anne…
I love this one, too.
Only 1 person since 2004 has told me he drank it. Thanks for liking.
“its fully matured contents” contrasts with the life cut short
Gaby, you have the eye…
love the details and surprise ending
I place the bottle on his tombstone.
I have no way of knowing
who will drink it this year.
Nice.
Thanks, Melva, for choosing those lines.