Sponsored by Workhorse, Lexington Poetry Month is an easy to use
platform for poets to publish and share their work in an attractive
way. The community is supportive and diverse, commenting and
encouraging one another throughout June. Money we raise goes
to maintaining the cost of the website and publishing the yearly
anthology. Our goals are to provide every poet (~150) a copy of
the anthology, lower printing costs, and expand opportunities
offered during Lexington Poetry Month, such as featured readings
and poetry workshops.
Just a thought…what if you drop the “It” on your first line and let the title lead right into the poem? Just a thought. (I have an personal phobia of starting poems or prose with It or It’s. Just one of my weirdnesses. It feels so vague.) Feel free to ignore my suggestion!
I love the image of “blowing peace/from its open/mouth,”
Thank you, Shaun. Wish I had more time to watch the clouds.
Lilting and lyrical. Floating and flowing. “Hair flowing/as if to embrace/every corner/of the earth.”
Thank you for reading. I appreciate the alliterations in your comment.
Concise and great imagery.
Just a thought…what if you drop the “It” on your first line and let the title lead right into the poem? Just a thought. (I have an personal phobia of starting poems or prose with It or It’s. Just one of my weirdnesses. It feels so vague.) Feel free to ignore my suggestion!
Thank you for your comment and suggestion. That does work better.