The Day After
extended light–
an added glow gifted from a burning bulb
acting as illusion fixed in midair
heat creeps between ticking seconds
bends clocks’ hands with sticky weight
pulls our joyous illumination along
for the year’s longest stretch
then the evening’s breeze enters
not as relief
but as a pressured push
to unstick the sky’s seeming pause
to coax clouds to set sail again–
daytime star arcs and descends
as is customary,
like a solitary raindrop kiss
splashing, parting itself like lovers’ lips
to taste the horizon before
darkness descends
slow at first, and growing
with each of the earth’s rotations
23 thoughts on "The Day After"
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This a lovely extended journey. I love “pressured push/to unstick to the sits seeming pause/to coax clouds to I sail again.” Emxcellent!
I seem have made up a word there! Excellent with a “m,” makes it extra special,
And yes, the “m” does make it extra special. New words are a gift! Thanks for sharing one here. 💜
Thank you, Linda! I’m glad you enjoyed the journey. 😎
A very sensory and sensual poem!
Many thanks, Bud! I appreciate your generous words.
that last stanza, especially, reminds me how imaginative those ancient Greeks and you are to invent all those wonderful myths
Thank you, Gaby! Such a big compliment. I appreciate your ki.d words and that you enjoyed reading this one.
That “solitary raindrop kiss” — whew, so nice. Happy day after solstice.
Thank you, Bill! I am always so torn on the summer solstice. It’s exciting to have such an abundance of light, and yet, now we move closer to extended darkness. It’s gorgeous and a tad melancholy in nature for me. Thanks for reading!
ahhh, a poem here:
“an abundance of light, and yet, now we move closer to extended darkness.”
Thank you, Pam! It’s like you found a mini poem inside the poem. Nesting doll poems!
I love this poem already and now a Russian essence added just makes it sing 🙂 great writing poet!
fav line of these beauties:
” a pressured push
to unstick the sky’s seeming pause
to coax clouds to set sail again–”
Thank you. I know that the word “solstice” is a combination of Latin terms for “sun” and an iteration of stillness or “to stand still’. I was hoping to capture that element– the way the sun seemed fixed, as if the entire sky stops moving for a bit. Thanks for reading!
Love how you delve into nature and bring a new dimension to it with your careful words,
Thank you, Linda. I appreciate your kind words. Sometimes the right phrase finds us, and it’s a joy when it does.
Authentic. Evocative. Multi-layered sensory experience: “solitary raindrop kiss/splashing” and concluding comment on life’s journey, H.A.:
“to taste the horizon before
darkness descends
slow at first, and growing
with each of the earth’s rotations.”
Thank you, L.! Yeah, the journey definitely sparks some commentary every now and again. Thank you for reading!
The way that you move and flow language here is incredibly smooth and evocative. I love:
“heat creeps between ticking seconds
bends clocks’ hands with sticky weight
pulls our joyous illumination along
for the year’s longest stretch…”
Wonferful!
Thanks, Shaun. I appreciate your kind words. I’m glad you enjoyed that moment in the poem. Thanks for reading!
Agree with Gaby: All beautiful, but that last stanza takes it.
“like a solitary raindrop kiss
splashing, parting itself like lovers’ lips
to taste the horizon before
darkness descends”
Thank you, Joseph.