The Decisive Moment
A quiet man in plain clothes,
With a plain-looking old camera
Chooses a spot at the top
Of an outdoor Parisian stairway
That looks like a spiraling nautilus,
And waits.
He waits until the light Is just right
And waits a bit more
Not knowing for what.
People walk by
On the cobblestones.
He is unnoticed –
A sniper above them
Watching their moves
And doing nothing.
Until a man on a bicycle
Comes racing by.
Did he anticipate this,
Or is it all serendipity?
He fires the shutter
At just the exact moment,
Not a second too early,
Not a second too late,
But at the exact moment
When the bicycle
Is between the handrail,
The curb,
And the wall.
The man on the stairs walks away
With a black and white masterpiece
Pulled right out of the air
That no one else ever guessed
Was there.
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Ah, You’ve caught the serendipity
of art.
Thank you!
Yeah !!!!
The serendipity and the patient realness of art.
overheard conversation at the bar later.
” wow he must have a really good camera ”
Great poem.
I love your observation about the camera. We really seem drawn to the idea that it is the equipment that makes it great. I fall that myself sometimes when I see a great guitarist, and think, “Man, I wish I had a guitar like Santana’s,” as though that would make any difference in my playing. I think about all the great blues players from the 30s and 40s who were playing on guitars that we would consider junk. And yet they made amazing music.
A sniper, a thief, an artist all in one—unrolled in such great drama. It is fantastique! I love this poem!!
Thank you!
Love this! Isn’t it the truth that the artists go undetected most times? I read it 5 times and discovered something new each read. Thanks!
That is a big complement!
Well done- like the slow tension build and the metaphor with a sniper.
Thanks for the thoughtful observation.
Love this so much!
Thank you so much!
Lovely instructive poem. I rarely muster the patience for the decisive moment!
Thank you. I think we generally don’t appreciate how much of art is waiting on the right moment.