The dog fight
The dog had a scar.
It ran the full length of his snout
from his left eye to his nose.
It was bulging. Keloid. Grotesque.
What happened to your dog? I asked.
My neighbor wore an Easter egg purple shirt.
He smiled and said,
We’ve been to the dog fights.
The bull pen.
The mattresses.
He told me about bared teeth
and snapping jaws
and claws cracked on cement,
trying for purchase,
pulling against restraint,
then unleashed the pure primal pleasure of the fight.
It’s been a hard year.
He said.
He showed me the pick line in his chest,
the bare spots where his hair had fallen out,
his cracked fingernails and teeth.
He stared me down,
not ashamed for his scars.
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Wow. The way you relay this conversation, suspending judgment. The neighbor is very real, even a sympathetic character by the end.
Thank you. I tried to make the dog fight as real as the neighbors fight. And the viciousness of the fight as real as the viciousness of the neighbors disease.
Wow, well done! Makes the reader feel and then turns that feeling on its head. The title works so well for both the dog and the man.
Thank you!