The Fainting Couch
Outstretched on the satin
velvet encrusted fainting couch,
a chaise from another time,
her long frame fit the dimensions and
allowed her to stretch
beyond imagination as she wrestled
with time and its crazed trickery.
She gazed upward and focused
on the ornate filigree
flush mount light,
aged in chipped paint and dust.
She tried to pull from her memory
where she purchased the fixture,
but like it, her memory was aged
in chipped paint and dust.
Sometimes it was painful,
tiny splinters in
her hands.
Othertimes it was a relief,
the sound of dance steps
across a wood floor.
She settled for a cup of chai tea.
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self therapy:
wonderful
Thank you.
I really like the description of memory. Beautiful.
Thank you.
The repeat of “in chipped paint and dust” is great!
Thank you.
I love the cinematic visualizations that your choices of words and way of laying language down provokes. This line got me:
“allowed her to stretch
beyond imagination as she wrestled
with time and its crazed trickery.”
And I love the way you pull the reader into the reverie of memory. This is a beautiful poem—!
Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words.
Well, now I need a fainting couch in my life! Beautiful, especially the last stanza!
Thank you so much. I do think a fainting couch would be an enticing place to write.