The Fishing Trip
I’m up front watching for logs, Conrad at the wheel.
In the middle seat, my daughter, bored already,
no screen to keep her mind busy,
fussing with the straps of her life jacket.
She wants to give names to all the minnows.
She hasn’t seen what we do with the hook.
A heron rises slow and prehistoric
and crosses the lake, complaining all the way.
Finger-bone stumps rise out of the water.
We tie off to one, slip a hook through a minnow —
my daughter cries on cue — and cast our lines.
Hours. Untie, cruise and drift.
Crappie aren’t biting, or we have
the wrong bait. So we cast close to the bank
hoping to scare up some bluegill.
Still better than a good day at work,
Conrad always says, and I always laugh,
and because I’m laughing, she laughs, too.
Tap-tap, the bobber dances, then goes under,
a big hit, ten-inch white crappie — at least
there’ll be something for her to remember.
Gray clouds move in, there’s a devil of a storm
brewing above the tree line.
It pushes a welcome cool breeze across the lake.
Now it’s a race for the dock and to get off the water:
she drags her fingers through the wake.
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I would like to see this character (daughter) in a book. You give her so much love in so few words. *She hasn’t seen what we do with the hook* and her dragging her fingers through the water are my favorite parts
That should have said life not love but I’ll take both lol
I’ll take both, too! Thanks for the comment and the great idea!
Oh Bill. I love the poem but the last line sent me to heaven.
This is lovely!
Beautiful poignant memory, lovingly recalled. Excellent. And I agree with others: It’s about the daughter.
This is a really lovely memory Bill. Thank you for giving me such a wonderful glimpse of your life.
she drags her fingers through the wake.
Great ending.
Bill, you have a great way of putting the reader right in the scene. I was wondering what your young daughter was feeling about the experience at the end of the day?