The General You
all these issues
what can you do?
it’s not you really
it’s The General You
not The Private You
in your own home
your own life
it’s one or someone
or somebody, not you
it’s The General You
certainly not The Captain You
in charge of others
productive and instructive
no, it’s The General You
not The Corporal You
who gives to The Salvation Army
or The Lieutenant You
who volunteers at the soup kitchen
and feels close to the front line
no it’s no that you
It’s The General You
who lets you have some space
see things from a distance
with him, not everything
has to be explained
it’s not about you,
all these issues,
so relax
and take off your shoes
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Love the ending. Kind of sums it all up. Relax and take of your shoes.
I enjoy the clever play on military ranks.
I love the playfulness and joy in this poem.
A barefoot five stars!
so like you jim and well put: working tirelessly to get to the point where you take off your shoes
I find myself returning to this poem, you hit the nail on the head. Can’t count the times I’ve heard, “is this about me?” or “I’m offended by your poem’ or “you got the facts wrong, it didn’t happen like that”. Now I have another tool to help them along, this poem. Thank you.
Great ending. Most of IT is never about you/me/….