The Good Barber
We were watching Wheel
when the barber came,
when the barber came
to cut her hair, my sister’s hair,
thinned and patched,
scalp afire from
the atom’s kiss.
Gently, gently the barber
worked, the scissors snipped,
the razor whirred.
She cried a little,
he bit his lip, but this
barber was good,
he worked on and on.
And when the barber
was finally done,
he held up the mirror
to that gleaming egg,
the slick bald dome
in which cancer nursed.
She cried again
but thanked him still,
he touched her shoulder
like a father would.
He refused to take
bills thrust his way,
the barber wouldn’t,
no matter how we pled.
It’s how people do,
the barber said,
then closed the door
and went away.
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It’s how people do!
Thanks to the good barber.
A beautiful tribute to a beautiful moment!
the repetition mimics the snipping. as do the monosyllable. I love this poem
What a kind barber! “scalp afire from/the atom’s kiss” is great imagery.
You capture this tender encounter so beautifully!
The phrase, “…he touched her shoulder like a father would” really sticks with me.
Beautiful moments in the poem. This — scalp afire from/
the atom’s kiss — is just incredible.
I really enjoy the cadence of this poem