The great Krampus this Christmastide
(for AC)
Being the grime and sand in each rainbow
of the coal stained church windows
of the Gospel Light Free Will Baptist,
and the silence of little babies
like those thank you cards embossed
into politeness by Daddy’s screams,
and owls screeching in the snow.
Being that you hunted on a grizzled road
wet with life, a sop-rained 120 miler nearer
to Pikeville where rivers made the lake
with help. Nature, interrupted by cash-grab
hands looking for clean-coal. Rolling,
a chauffeured Mercedes-Benz, where
the hills whisper your name every six years.
Addison. Mitchell. McConnell.
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Oh, I really like this one. I love the long, musical sentence that’s the first verse and the implied socio-economic and environmental consequences in the second verse. We done!
Typo alert. Well done, Manny. You are having a spectacular month.
Sndi think you wrote this one.9
Wow!
I really have loved your Alberti this year, however this is awesome !!!
Your Andalusian sensibilities really drive this Appalachian poem home.
This feels old as the hills themselves.
Wow!
Very nice! This poem has the power to lull and then surprise.
A gem of an American sonnet
the wonderful meter
& rhyme, near & slant
the ominous whisper at the end,
it’s social import
like Prine’s Peabody Coal Train
I especially like “a grizzled road” and “sop-rained”
Love it, and “daddy’s screams” versus the “hills whispers” — yes!
Beautiful tribute. I’ve loved your translations this month but it’s good to hear your own voice.