The Great Seattle
Eight years old on the Puget Sound fishing for flounder,
up out came an enormous,
parasitical specimen
one could only call a
spotted great white
I fell backward in the boat crying. Who did this?
Why? He flopped
there, seconds from death,
in the bottom of the white splintered boat, gills reaching
for water, fingering the air
I was happier before we
caught it
When the flounder quieted and
was unhooked, he went back in the water,
but didn’t swim away. Papí looked like a stack of sad Christmases,
he was flying back for work in seven hours,
and I could only cry because I loved him so.
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Interesting, (purposeful) conflicting/incongruent emotions in this one. Intriguing, sir
My favorite parts are the grief – falling over in the boat, the stack of sad Christmases. The realization I was happier before we caught even though that’s technically the goal of fishing
gills as fingers. beautiful!
I love:
seconds from death,/in the bottom of the white splintered boat, gills reaching/for water, fingering the air
Lots of surprises and great lines in this one!
Crushingly poignant. You and Bill Brymer are in the same boat today.
I admire how the images mirror the emotion–unresolved and unresolvable.