The Lesson
“Our world is built
on competition,” the teacher says.
We listen closely,
each trying to sit up straighter
and look more engaged than those next to us.
“Cooperation is more effective
than competition,” the teacher says.
We nod in understanding
as we fight to be the closest to the front,
to hear and understand the lessons the best.
“Now what have we learned?”
the teacher asks,
then watches as we all scramble
to give the loudest, best, most detailed answer.
Talking over one another,
pushing and shoving with our words
it all swirls into a cacophony
from which one answer rings loud and clear-
“Nothing.”
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Great story, great progression, and a powerful message. Thank you for sharing!
I really enjoyed this. Like Philip said, the progression is wonderful.
Exactly what you said, and you said it so well!
Hahaha!
Love the use of dialogue contrasted to movement of students:
“Cooperation is more effective
than competition,” the teacher says.
We nod in understanding
as we fight to be the closest to the front,
to hear and understand the lessons the best.
The last stanza: well said and well shown in this poem!