The Morbs
This is for the bird that dips away
just before my car hits it in midflight.
This is for the woman with the urge
to turn right on the bridge and resists
the river’s murky and cool waters.
This is for the boy who can’t quit.
This is for the nonbinary person in their car,
dry-heaving in the afternoon heat,
resuscitated.
This is for the lock and for the key,
for the bite and wound,
for those who’ve left,
for those who’ve stayed,
despite, well, everything.
31 thoughts on "The Morbs"
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very compassionate
Thanks, Mike!
The lock & key, the bite & wound really grabbed me. Great lines.
Thanks, Bernard!
Those last 2 lines. Boom. Everything these days. Thanks for sharing
Thanks, and solidarity!
I don’t understand the title but love the poem. Big feeling, big vision, Whitmanesque.
Thanks, Kevin!
The title comes from Victorian slang–saying someone’s “got the morbs“ was akin to saying they were feeling melancholic.
You covered a lot of ground in a few lines. Love the vision of the poem and the specifics too.
Thank you, Linda!
any day I am introduced to a new word is a great day, Shaun
Thanks, Dr. Bedetti!
Like others, I love the play between lock and key and bite and wound. And that “everything” — very nicely done.
Thank you, Bill!
You write with immense passion, nice!
Thank you! I really appreciate it
Well, I love a poem that begins with a bird or two, especially ones where the bird escapes the vehicle. Enjoyed the dedication and inclusiveness. Ending is wonderful. I’m looking forward to reading more of your work this month, Shaun!
Thanks, and likewise, Sylvia!
(I always am thankful when the birds cheat physics and escape somehow)
Incredible This is– capture the image of each “This is” so well.
Thank you, Pam!
A grand exposition of universal love, sir!
for those who’ve left,
for those who’ve stayed,
despite, well, everything.
Bravo!
Thanks, Manny! I think noticing is definitely a kind of love
Yeah, the lock and key. Well done.
Thanks, Allen! Your comment just made me think, that the key and lock depend on each other to exist.
Lock and key. Really enjoyed this piece.
Thank you, Alissa!
Others have said eloquently what this poem has done for them. Their comments are for your words and deservingly so.
I really appreciate your kind words. The LexPoMo community feeds me each June with our sharing of thought and words
So moving! Each specific image says so much. Wow.