The Other End of the Comfort Zone
There’s a painting
of a cow bone on the wall
of the bathroom and
india tile lines the stall
with its cistern waterfall.
My feet, touching the slate
cut by untouchables, rest
in the pool and let go the heat
of steel toed boots.
This aqueous state soothes
my soul with its slow pour
over my poor crown. I stand
on this earthen surface
and consider how the stone
in this dark and shaded place
holds it cool. I stay and stay
until distant thunder pulls
me out, bow to the cow bone,
towel off
and look out the grotto window
to a northern view: soft fescue
and locust trees all the way
to electric poles on U.S. 62
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especially love “My feet, touching the slate/ cut by untouchables” and “soft fescue” and the context provided by the title
bow to the cow bone… yes!!
Jim, your personal poem reaches out to the world and brings it back to soft fescue and locust trees. Well done…
Wonderful! Especially love the rhymes in this one.
This is so lovely in many ways. Such clear images, sounds!
I particularly love the imagery in “india tile lines the stall/with its cistern waterfall.” The rhyme scheme is lovely as well!
So many lovey sounds and beautiful images.