The War
“The real war will never get in the books.”
— Walt Whitman
It was not a war we read about—
but the one we lived inside.
It began in the quiet:
when secrets slipped through the seams
of our life—
spilling into
our home,
our children,
our truths.
D-Day was the slow drip of revelation,
betrayal
leaking out
in hesitant confessions
and fragmented memories
replayed like ghosted film.
Later,
It arrived again—
when I said no,
and you forced your yes.
Then again, and again, and again—
when effort grew quiet,
intentionality died,
and love was left
unspoken,
untouched,
unfelt.
But the final battle
was not loud.
It came after years and years
of trying to win
what could not be won.
It came
as I raised
a white flag
with trembling hands,
and finally named
what you would not:
defeat.
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Nice poem! It is kind of hard to read them when they’re double spaced like this though.
I noticed when posting mine that if you “paste as plain text” you don’t get the annoying extra spaces.
Andrea, hi! I don’t scan-read. I read word by word, into the rythmic flow, but likely slower than many others. This is a very moving, power poem. Not a scanner, made the end Very unexpected, as a knock-out punch! Complete defeat…Destroyed! Sure you’ve spoken for many. A masterpiece of poetic timing. Bless you…
I love the way you write. It fits me. I felt it. 👏