The water’s clear
and guppies are swarming,
hiding from the carp in the depths,
showing themselves in
the morning light like hot coals
in the cool shallows, afraid to risk
the center of the pond, so much more
room to move, so much space
to school up and make shapes
in the currents, so much
for different worlds, so much for
a taste of the universe, there may be
teeth and stomach acid, let alone
whatever fish know as god—
the glimmering sun? flakes of bread?
the stalking heron at the edges?
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love this portrait and the sense of danger you create
gorgeous!
I love it! Applicable to us as humans too…so often afraid to risk.
Nowhere is safe in this poem, which contrasts very well with a title that suggests comfort and safety to us humans who can see more of the pond. Genius idea!
So much of this was really fascinating to me: loved “let alone/whatever fish know as god”
Love “so much for a taste of the universe.” It reflects what we miss when we hug the edge and do not dive into the depths.