there’s blood in my shoe (haiku)
there’s blood in my shoe.
i never notice the pain
until it is done.
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there’s blood in my shoe.
i never notice the pain
until it is done.
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You captured this feeling well!
Interesting use of the haiku form.
This made me wonder so much about the last line, whether “it” was a reference to the pain, the blood, the shoe, or an action that the speaker hadn’t shared. I like the topic of blood for such a classically image-centered form.
This comment makes me so happy because that is exactly what I wanted. Thank you!!