they say the eagles
still nest nearby
when I come back in a year
I will get to see their steep wing span
and bright white heads
joining me in my return
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still nest nearby
when I come back in a year
I will get to see their steep wing span
and bright white heads
joining me in my return
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I love the idea of this poem and it’s imagery. I like the joining of yourself to the eagles, to nature.
I wonder if you need “get to?” Does “I will see…” feel stronger to you or not? Just a thought! Feel free to ignore me.