this kentucky june morn
Emily Withenbury suggested a cento for this last day–with a twist–the lines come from our own poetry from this month. My thirty lines . . . (title is one of them).
my mind paints life-scapes–
i brush on their colors, soft,
smear sagey hue on canvas,
listen to sage whispers
dance against white blooms.
a nugget of life’s meaning,
penciling color onto black and white
i hear, let color flow over you–
yes, the yellow of sunflowers.
then daybreak observations
shout, we elegant dance.
kentucky speaks from very near–
a look and feel and smile
enjoying stillness under colorful masses
with soft breezes, rich colors, callings–
i break free, in garden
play at new play, rural peace,
consider the steady measure of day.
in dim moonlight, i see deer leap,
girl swing from oak branch. she smiles, laughs.
through new days, forever gifts of magic,
i live vicariously via songs
among butterfly wings
who whisper i’m cool, too
and echos of triumphant trumpets
satisfy for now, reasons to be still,
and i breathe in a ton of love.
in poetry, in hope,
i bid all an adieu. for now.
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Such a cool exercise and what an amazing end product. Love the butterfly wings whispering I’m cool, too.
Thank you, Bill! It was a telling exercise!
a nice tapestry
of the whole month
Thank you, Jim!
Beautifully written! Thanks for sharing!
Thank you, Linda! Thank you for sharing with us this month!
Simply gorgeous;
my mind paints life-scapes–
i brush on their colors, soft,
smear sagey hue on canvas,
listen to sage whispers
dance against white blooms.
a nugget of life’s meaning,
penciling color onto black and white
i hear, let color flow over you–
yes, the yellow of sunflowers.
Thank you, Pam!
Beautiful, Michele. I had to read it twice to get the full effect (and because some poems demand encores). Also, I love how you mastered the form. You’re a great poet. I hope to read you next year, and thank you for your interest in my work.
Thank you, Lee! Such a lovely compliment from such a lovely poet! It’s been an honor to read your work.
This cento works so wonderfully! It’s been great sharing in poetry with you this month.
Thank you, Shaun! You are so kind–and the feeling is mutual!
This came out so beautiful!! A new creation all its own! Thank you for sharing your work this month. It’s been wonderful to read!
Thank you, Leah! Thank you for sharing, too–I look forward to reading more of your work next year!
Yes! Adieu to you — for now.
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Ohhh this worked SO well for you!! And I think our centos actually pair really nicely together. They share some sort of undercurrent of energy. Or maybe better stated, mine is way sadder but aspires to be yours. Lol!
Thanks for all your kind comments this month (and for wishing me a happy birthday). Best of luck with where your writing takes you next. Cheers!