Three Birds, Hanging Stained Glass
The sun has to be low on the horizon
and then the birds catch fire, glow.
What was before unremarkable,
now shines, pulses with an inner blaze.
The one on the far right has a red eye,
the one in the middle sparkles like glitter.
They all shine like sunlight on water,
a warm golden shimmer.
Like an ordinary Thursday afternoon
unloading groceries from the car and then
remembering love
that moment of brilliant light.
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Great shift of gaze at the end from the mundane to the brilliant
I love watching fiery birds flit across the sunset, just as I love this poem, a look at the ordinary through the lens of the extraordinary! I agree with Liz, the shift at the end is seamless and heartwarming!
This is a very effective poem. The fusion of experience works so well.
Beautiful leap at the end. Bravo.
Nice – Pat. I love thinking about “what was before unremarkable”
thanks for that. It’s all about paying attention, isn’t it?
Yes, paying attention. What a lovely ending stanza, Pat.
You have captured the brilliant light as only a poet can!