To the Bone
I told you
I loved you
to the bone.
Perhaps that wasn’t it,
But boy are you still there
In my depths
Crushed between my marrow
And my ancestors’ gifts –
Stuck like a cloth
In a gap between timbers
Purposedly tucked in.
No room left,
No air.
I felt your touch
To the bone.
I loved your quirks
To the bone.
I shattered
when you walked
without even throwing my way
A bone.
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Your description of past loves living in a person’s bones is fascinating!
I’m glad you like it! Thanks for reading, Katrina 🙂
This is so well done. The short lines emphasize the emotion. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for reading, Nancy!
You convey pain of lost love so well!
Thanks for your comments, Linda <3
Wow!
Crushed between my marrow
And my ancestors’ gifts –
Glad you liked it, Pam. Thanks for reading. 🙂
Què chingón!! Mi favorito aqui. This poem is perfect.
Best reaction ever. Glad you liked it, Doug 🙂