Trading Comfort
For a handful of blackberries,
a bucket of sweat.
A dozen webs across my face
to hear the thrush’s song.
Muddy boots, grassy shins, gnats in my eyes
for a single centimeter of purple silk,
chicory petal pressed
between finger and thumb.
I tick check, chigger check, poison ivy check,
but mostly, I am out here checking—
Am I alive?
Am I a part of this?
The spider dangling from my lashes
assures me
I am.
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Love this especially the ending!
Thank you, Linda!
Beautiful episode of nature. Love the details.
Thanks, Virginia!
This is so creative and well-crafted. Wonderful sensory details. And relateable! Ticks, chiggers, poison ivy — yup.
Thank you, E.E! Ticks, chiggers, poison ivy – the banes of every nature-loving Kentuckian’s existence!
Yummy, The ending is perfect.
Thanks, Kevin!!
Been there “Muddy boots, grassy shins, gnats in my eyes
for a single centimeter of purple silk,/chicory petal pressed
between finger and thumb.” and agree…it is well worth it but at the time of picking I am never sure!
Haha, yes, I definitely have to remind myself that it’s worth it sometimes!
This poem is a delight to the senses and great to read out loud!
Thank you so much, Shaun! I love that you read it aloud.