Transfiguration
With time, I aim to resurrect
the full breath discovered
in my singing lessons,
my exhale becoming your inhale
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With time, I aim to resurrect
the full breath discovered
in my singing lessons,
my exhale becoming your inhale
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The exhale/inhale thing is interesting. After reading the poem I tried to do it. Thank you for the poem, Linda
Brief, breath of a poem singing a song.
The resurrection of breath is an interesting idea, and, in this case, done for artistic purposes. Nicely done.
I agree with what others have said.
The sharing of breath this way is an old tradition that you “transfigue” so beautifully into song.
the title encompasses
exhale…inhale
besitifully
sweet poem.
this poem set me on fire