Travelog
From the tired hotel on 2nd and Broad
where Johnny Cash stayed, the sign says,
and the Beatles and the termites,
she stares out at a scraped sky
remembers the conversation that led
to her own Southernmost Point
where everything stood behind her
Remembers how he pulled her aside
there’s a whole world out there,
he said and what are you, chicken?
Remembers his confidence and
how she followed, entranced, as he
slithered away, back before she realized
he didn’t even have hands
She wondered what the big
apple would taste like – oh it was soft
at the core, some new kind of rotten
and the worm in the middle
still squirmed on the floor
where she spit it out, laughing
and writhing at her feet
She lifted her suitcase
with the strength of a woman who
found what she’s looking for elsewhere
Elsewhere.
She never had to leave home for this.
Everywhere you go, you have to make
your own sparkle –
Any city is sin city if you do it right.
12 thoughts on "Travelog"
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Love it. That last line is killer.
Yes! I agree with Kevin. That last line delivers. I also love
“Remembers his confidence and
how she followed, entranced, as he
slithered away, back before she realized
he didn’t even have hands”
Excellent allusion.
I love the line “the Beatles and the termites.” This piece has a great voice
OK so , I’m gonna go with the whole third stanza as my favorite part.
This is good and the last line …..
Oh it’s clippable, wearable, stitchable and all the others……copyright that!
This is fantastic. The whole thing, but the last stanza is incredible.
Thank you all! Sometimes I get a last line of a poem in my head and have to find my way to it – that’s what this was
Sometimes we get that line and we build around it. This one is brilliant!
We are beginning to read some great poetry this June…
Atmospheric and mysterious. I want to hear more about these two characters!
great journey you took us on- scraped sky!
Love the opening stanza and all the way through to the great last line that you built around!
Elsewhere
Elsewhere
Well done!