Tropical Storm Eta
Even the day after,
the world is gray and sodden,
subdued. Still haunting my mind,
yesterday’s torrential rain,
battering wind, screeching
tornado warnings.
I didn’t venture outside all day.
The air now so silent, shamed at yesterday’s
violence. Brings back tantrums
of my own. What were the spirits thinking
to become so enraged? We can only take
a deep breath of relief. Now and then,
a tentative bird calls.
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Love the idea of the air being “shamed at yesterday’s violence.”
I too love “The air now so silent, shamed…” and then the deep relief.
I like the last line “now and then, a tentative bird calls.”
Surely to see if that horrid storm is gone!
Yes, smiles
I love this poem. Its force and yet “shamed.” The connection back to the personal really adds another layer and makes the ending even more lovely.
I’m striving to introduce more of that into my work. Thanks for noticing