TUMBLING AFTER
the view was nice up there
on the hill, near the pond
our little town in all its
“splendor”
we could see everything
my house had the big tree–
the one that, two years later,
would fall and crush my dad’s
Mustang
your house had the pool
the kids in the neighborhood
knew your mom
always baked
cookies from scratch
my little sister cried
when we said she couldn’t come,
but the view was nice–
worth it
you and me,
billowy clouds,
insistent and direct
sun
you said you liked me
more than a friend
you liked me
i laughed,
thought it was a joke
you laughed–
of course it was
we should go bike riding
you said
you would meet me later
and we would pin
baseball cards into
the spokes
and pretend
we had motorcycles
but i didn’t see you again
that day
and when i did see you again,
it was different–
as if my best friend
had been replaced by an
almost exact duplicate
that was, of course, a
long time ago
i’ve got my own kids now
and so do you
i think you are in Missouri,
maybe Kansas
i still think about the two of you often–
the one who sat on the hill with me,
counting clouds,
and the one who always came
in your place, after–
and i wonder
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I loved this poem about revisiting the past. What if?
Thank you, Linda, for your comment.
Man, poems like these hit me right in the feels. It’s something we all experience, these moments saturated with the potential energy of what could have been. Great work.
Thank you, Philip, for your comment.
The idea of “the two of you” is powerful. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you, Nancy, for your comment.
Fantastic