Twilight Tanka
our stars have refused
time after eternal time
to send ladders down
–give us the ascending light
even if we aren’t worthy
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our stars have refused
time after eternal time
to send ladders down
–give us the ascending light
even if we aren’t worthy
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the stars must know
what they’re doing
I like the way you make readers
pause
thank you! line breaks like to help us when we let them. 😊🤗💙😎🙏
Oh! I forgot about tankas! Thanx for reminder! I also like the image of stars sending down ladders.
Thank you—and cheers for tankas too!! They are refreshing to write. 🙏✨💙