Two Grandfathers
They called him Bro’ Pops,
The folks of Crooked Tree, Belize
All day he rested on the veranda
Facing the lagoon
Watched for birds
Listened to the wind rippling the water
Was fed by the old cook
Who kept him company when she could
By day the women and young children of the village
Traced the dusty paths to visit him
By evening the older children came on horseback
He slept well
Our PopPop, in his eighties
Took care of the mail
The cooking
The bills
My grandmother
Shuffling around the suburbs by himself
In and out of the car
To the bank
The pharmacy
The grocery
He joked of death by schlepping
Evenings on the balcony
He’d catch his breath
Scan the stars
But sleep eluded him
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Linda, I love the contrast between the halves of this poem. That worry and constant work does not make for a night of restfulness and ease. Whether there be love and devotion in it. The language is so deceptively simple, saying so much when unpacked with careful reading. Thank you.
This is really nice. After I read the first stanza I wasn’t expecting the contrast of the second stanza. It made for an interesting surprise.
I like the contrast, too. There is also a twinning here. It’s very effective!
Bro Pops had it going on! Visitors came to him, even the old cook catered to him. It makes me feel for PopPop, a good man but his life seems more the caretaker.
Yes, I wanted to transport PopPop to Crooked Tree.