understood as is
pieces of old making
celestial-pared
hue of sky
celestial-pared
hue of sky
dignified to suggest
dust immemorial
a hand on the wall
for any neglect
we find
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Love “dignified to suggest/
dust immemorial”
Love the shape.
thanks. still not sure if 2 and 3 should be swapped…
The dignified line being bookended does something for it.
maybe I’ll just swap the two middle lines.
i’d like it to hint/nod a bit more clearly to those
prehistoric cave hand paintings.
(even tho they were in done in red)
just.can’t.decide. 🙂
Love the sounds and near rhymes. It’s a delightful one to read aloud.
I love the consision here, love “celestial-pared/hue of sky”
Similarly loved this/these line(s) as well.
I’m with Bill on this one
and blend in one’s own
mystical mysterious
meaning
Nice music in this. I don’t understand it but I dig it.
I interpreted this as a reminder to appreciate the beauty around us and to acknowledge our own imperfections, which resonated with me, great work!