Undoing
I wasn’t sure
When I would
Finally break
Fully apart
I had been
Scooping
Up pieces
Holding
It all
Together
By a thread
For a very
Long Time
My undoing
Had a day and time
It turns out
Wednesday
8:43pm
The cat
Broke
A vase
And more
Than just
Dirty water
And
Dead roses
Fell
To
The
Floor
4 thoughts on "Undoing"
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Love the motions- scooping, falling vase, break apart, cat moving around
Feel the energy
“More than just dirty water and dead roses”
This line gave me chills in the best way!
Brilliant last stanza
God I feel this to the core of me. Great work
You have a true talent for powerful, short works of art.