Unity
On a still silent lake
Sun sifting
Into the slow
End of day’s black rim–
Casting a spring
Silvery bluish streaked
Slate-like shadow
Upon the glassy surface–
A God whisper?
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I’m skating through all the “s” sounds and pause at the soft “s” in “whisper”
A God whisper–fabulous, and somehow moreso because it applies to things seen, not heard. A wonder.
Yes, all those “s” sounds are a wonder. A joyful poem!
i was on board and loving this until that word
‘god’
like such a heavy turd in an otherwise
beautiful punchbowl..
I get that.