Unrelenting
He fingers the sunburn blisters
on the ridge of his balding scalp.
Looses another button on his shirt
so the absent wind can waft his chest.
Nibbles at the salty jerky and flips
around the freezer bag with bottled water,
a granola bar, some tube of fruity gel.
Melting into the bench in front
of the church that gave him the sack,
he watches the sun rise like an angry god.
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Oh, man! This is good. That last stanza.
Thanks, Chelsie! I’m glad that worked for you.
I think it was a the double meaning of “gave him the sack” that got me.
The poems fills with emotion by the last line and keeps refilling since I kept reading it outloud.
Thanks so much, Linda!
sustained pain
the absent wind can waft his chest – this is a picture of hoping against hope – is this hell or what? love it.
Thanks so much, man!
Melting–disappearing from our view, but the poem strikes the reader with his afterimage. How they gave him salty jerky and a bottle of water…I agree with Manny, this is torment.
Blistering poem, Jason!