Dissatisfied
There is a better poem here
underneath the layers
of self doubt and questioning
line breaks, behind
the veil of writer’s block.
I’ve written three scrapped
poems before this one,
and I’m still disatisfied
with my results.
I’ll just keep digging
until I discover what
I’m looking for.
Maybe I’ll find it soon.
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This speaks to me on a sublevel level. I feel it deep in my bones. I hope the other 3 poems turn out for you.
The struggle is always there
You show it
Isn’t that the way it always goes. Seems like you found it.
A poem is a poem however we get to it!
You write well about the process!
I’ve been there too. Be patient and it will come.
You captured the struggle in this poem.