Untended
If I ever need a quick something from the store,
there is a nearby pharmacy I can walk to in minutes,
a walk I’ll gladly make in almost any kind of weather,
but I especially love it on these spring/summer days.
Along the way, I pass by a closed down restaurant,
a family favorite that fell just before the pandemic.
I was sad to see it go, for all of the memories made there
and I think about their beauty as I pass by.
Around this still standing shell of a building,
the landscaping is gradually being reclaimed by nature.
Untended gardens now burst in a myriad of colors,
flowers I would name if I knew anything about flowers.
There are oranges and yellows in star-shapes with slender petals
and my favorite is a white kind with a deep purple center.
They stand like queens over the garden
with butterflies and bumblebees coming to pay homage.
This all strikes as a different kind of beauty
which only blossomed because nobody cared.
These persistent plants fill a space that would
otherwise look like everything else.
All this makes it just another place to draw inspiration from
in daily battles with feeling like not a lot of people care.
Untended, I grow on my own, which then helps me discover
all the beautiful ways that life keeps going on.
9 thoughts on "Untended"
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no place is unclaimed by mother earth, nature shows up in the most unlikely places. your poem is an expression of this. nice
Exactly. Thank you for the comment!
You have strong images. I like.
Thank you!
“Family favorite that fell.” Wonderful use of alliteration. Great to be reading your work again! God Bless!
Likewise, it’s good to be reading your work too. Been too long. God bless!
Your comparison of the deep purple flowers to queens with butterflies and bees paying homage made me smile. And I love the way your story turns to introspection and connection with the untended. Love it! Keep tending your gift.
I think you should create new descriptions of the untended. Anyone can look up the name of a flower-but only someone with fresh eyes can describe it anew.
lovely metaphor