Bellwether
We always thought the big house was forever.
It had stood on the big hill like an old god,
its sprawl a looming force over the train track.
It sat just high enough beyond the country store
that we’d see it no matter where we stood
as it watched. We known it
even through all the different renovations.
After another fire, it was razed and replaced
by a Family Dollar. The little store closed down.
I wish I had something to end this poem:
an image of a pokeweed growing through
dollar store asphalt, but no.
There is hope here–don’t get it twisted–
but, yes, it is also sometimes sad as hell.
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It had stood on the big hill like an old god,
its sprawl a looming force over the train track.
It sat just high enough beyond the country store
that we’d see it no matter where we stood
as it watched…….
I know this house!!! Love this poem, and the meta theatre at the end really works.
The ghosts of homes and buildings are memory poems in so many communities, particularly those with deep roots of remembering
Kevin
bellwether house replaced by bad weather FamDoll. it happened in my town too, except it was the old school
Descriptions lush, but I agree with Manny: The real turn came with the Meta and that image (that wasn’t an image) of the pokeweed is what stuck inside me.
This poem say a whole lot with very little. The image of no
pokeweed growing through dollar store asphalt carries so much grief!
Shawn – One of my favorites! Last stanza slayed!
love the mood and surprise ending
love the mock resolution of the sonnet’s ending