After Ludwig
“Oh friends, not these sounds! Let us instead strike up more pleasing
and more joyful ones!” Ludwig van Beethoven
Why did you hide
behind grief these
many years gone
and shadow abide?
O joy if I somehow
am able to put into
words the troubled
need for telling true.
2.
Grief was my partner
on pedestals painted
target of all my desires.
Oh if I knew you waited.
Joy, you hid behind hot
grief eclipsed. The sad
affair with that longing
felt warm, real and alive.
Grief’s intimate suffering
is tender love making art.
Grief is the good medicine
sweetness, Elysium’s mark.
3.
O Joy if ever we only could
put to tint the lies of grief’s
dun shade on your fair head.
How that sad mourning relief
tricked me, made me believe
that all great art could be only
ever done clear justice in grieving.
Fooled me into the falshood of lonely.
4.
O joy new and sweet, how you stayed
hidden away during the illness I can not say.
Perhaps it just requires the knowing of the ruse.
Grief he said, makes good medicine and a jealous muse.
9 thoughts on "After Ludwig"
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This poem has excellent cadence and I love the old-timey feel to the diction. The message really comes across. Well done!
Thank you 😀
Yeah a lot of moving pieces 😉
I love you.
Grief he said, makes good medicine and a jealous muse.
This is absolutely true.
In the midst of it and you said it. Thank you for this poem!
Thanks from me, too. I needed to read this one.
i also like the old timey diction
and the rhyming. so good how
you show grief is part of happiness
Thank you Jim
Yes !!
Even joy itself names grief good medicine.
Yes!
Nice shape poem — the lengthening lines fit the material.
Thanks libby, yeah the epigraph is the intro that Beethoven wrote for ode to joy when he used it to end his 9th So I was kinda trying to let the landing slide out.