ALMOST
My cheek rests
on your breastbone,
pale skin on brown,
moonlight
on chocolate
I hear a roar, pull,
a whisper rush, lapse
a fall to hush
In a particular pause
between heartbeats
your breastplate rib cage
my ear, in the dip, there,
caught, released I rise
through undertow, ebb
Like I lean
to a conch
pearly pink, just so,
molecules sing
to my inner ear, pass
the tiniest hammer
anvil there, flutter
waves down
my jaw to lips, open
ancient echo ache
of desire, my head
chamber welcomes
wind, water, breath
it’s almost
like that
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love the fine detail of the second stanza, especially “released I rise/ through undertow”
Thank you, Gaby. I appreciate the detail that you liked.
Thank you, Gaby. I appreciate the detail of what you spoke to you.
correction— of what spoke to you!!
So detailed and sensual. Just beautiful!
Thank you so much, my dear friend. It means a lot to me.
Lovely, Shelda!
Merci, dear Kevin ! It is a compliment I take to heart.
Beautiful, sensual poem! “Ancient echo ache/of desire” Oh yes! You caught it. Amazing imagery!
Thank you so much, Kathleen! I really appreciate the phrases quoted so I know what resonates!